PR #8

linux/README.md

@@ -1,24 +1,24 @@
 I2Pd Browser Portable builder for Linux
 =====
-This is script-based builder of I2Pd Browser Portable
+This is a script-based builder of I2Pd Browser Portable
 
 What works now
 -----
 * Auto detecting system language
 * Auto detecting architecture
-* Pre-configuring FireFox to use with I2Pd
+* Pre-configuring Firefox to use with I2Pd
 * Auto downloading NoScript extension
 
 How to use
 -----
-1. Build preconfigured FireFox using script `build.sh` from `build` folder
+1. Build pre-configured Firefox using script `build.sh` from `build` folder
-2. Run i2pd by executing `./i2pd` from `i2pd` folder
+2. Run I2Pd by executing `./i2pd` from `i2pd` folder
-3. Run FireFox by executing `./firefox-portable`
+3. Run Firefox by executing `./firefox-portable`
 
 Additional info
 -----
-`./i2pd` from `i2pd` folder starts screen session with i2pd in it.
+`./i2pd` from `i2pd` folder starts a screen session with i2pd in it.
-To stop i2pd router you can use command `Start graceful shutdown` of `Force shutdown`
+To stop the i2pd router you can use the commands `Start graceful shutdown` or `Force shutdown`
 from i2pd webconsole page `http://127.0.0.1:7070/?page=commands`
 
 SHA512SUMS created with `find * -type f -print0 | xargs -0 -i sha512sum {}` command

linux/build/build.sh

@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@ ftpmirror="https://ftp.mozilla.org/pub/$application/releases/$version"
 
 curlfind=$(which curl)
 if [ -z $curlfind ]; then
-	echo "Can't find 'cURL' installed. That script needs it!";
+	echo "'cURL' does not seem to be installed. The script needs it!";
 	exit 1;
 fi
 
-echo "This script prepearing $application $version for use with I2Pd"
+echo "This script is preparing $application $version for use with I2Pd"
 
 file="$application-$version.tar.bz2"
 filepath="linux-$arch/$language/$file"
@@ -26,13 +26,13 @@ filepath="linux-$arch/$language/$file"
 echo "Downloading $application..."
 curl -L -f -# -O $ftpmirror/$filepath
 if [ $? -ne 0 ]; then # Not found error, trying to cut language variable
-	echo "[TRY 2] I'll try download Firefox with shortener language code";
+	echo "[TRY 2] I'll try downloading Firefox with shorter language code";
 	language=$(echo $language | cut -c-2)
 	# re-create variable with cutted lang
 	filepath="linux-$arch/$language/$file"
 	curl -L -f -# -O $ftpmirror/$filepath
 	if [ $? -ne 0 ]; then # Not found error, trying to download english version
-		echo "[TRY 3] I'll try download Firefox with English language code";
+		echo "[TRY 3] I'll try downloading Firefox with the English language code";
 		language="en_US"
 		# re-create lang variable
 		filepath="linux-$arch/$language/$file"
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ if [ $? -ne 0 ]; then # Not found error, trying to cut language variable
 fi
 
 if [ ! -f $file ]; then
-	echo "[Error] Can't find downloaded file. Is it really exists?"
+	echo "[Error] Can't find downloaded file. Does it really exist?"
 	exit 1;
 fi
 
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ echo "Downloading NoScript extension..."
 curl -L -f -# -O https://addons.mozilla.org/firefox/downloads/latest/noscript/addon-722-latest.xpi
 mv addon-722-latest.xpi ../app/browser/extensions/{73a6fe31-595d-460b-a920-fcc0f8843232}.xpi
 
-echo "Adding standart configs..."
+echo "Adding standard configs..."
 cp profile/* ../data/
 mkdir -p ../app/browser/defaults
 cp -r preferences ../app/browser/defaults/

windows/build/build.cmd

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ echo.
 if "%locale%"=="Russian" (
 	echo <EFBFBD> á¯ ª®¢ª  ãáâ ­®¢é¨ª  ¨ 㤠«¥­¨¥ ­¥ ­ã¦­ëå ä ©«®¢
 ) else (
-	echo Unpacking the installer and delete unnecessary files
+	echo Unpacking the installer and deleting unnecessary files
 )
 
 7z x -y -o..\Firefox FirefoxPortableESR_%FFversion%_%locale%.paf.exe > nul
@@ -127,9 +127,9 @@ xcopy /E /I /Y i2pd ..\i2pd > nul
 
 echo.
 if "%locale%"=="Russian" (
-	echo I2Pd Browser portable £®â®¢ ª § ¯ãáªã!
+	echo I2Pd Browser Portable £®â®¢ ª § ¯ãáªã!
 ) else (
-	echo I2Pd Browser portable is ready to start!
+	echo I2Pd Browser Portable is ready to start!
 )
 pause
 exit