update homepage info

Signed-off-by: r4sas <r4sas@i2pmail.org>

templates/home.twig

@@ -9,25 +9,25 @@
 
         <p>
         <b>Info:</b><br>
-        Service works, hosts check done every hour.<br>
+        Service is Up. Hosts check is done every hour.<br>
         Supported commands:
         <ul>
              <li>adding of hosts for 2LD domains (example.i2p)</li>
              <li>adding subdomains (addsubdomain)</li>
-             <li>adding/changing destination (adddest, changedest) - destination will be replaced with new one, old will be purged</li>
+             <li>adding/changing destination (adddest, changedest) - destination is replaced with the new one, old destination is purged</li>
         </ul>
         </p>
 
         <p>
         <b>Subscription:</b><br>
         For addressbook subscription use <a href="/hosts.txt">/hosts.txt</a> file.<br>
-        That link returns basic addressbook if request sent first time or without <code>If-Match-None</code> header.<br>
-        On next requests it will return full alive hosts list.
+        The link returns basic addressbook upon initial request or request with no <code>If-Match-None</code> header.<br>
+        Following requests will return full alive hosts list.
         </p>
 
         <p>
         <b>Static links to lists:</b><br>
-        Lists updated every 4 hours.
+        Lists are updated every 4 hours.
         <ul>
             <li>Basic list: <a href="/export/hosts-basic.txt">/export/hosts-basic.txt</a> - contains short list of alive popular services</li>
             <li>Alive list: <a href="/export/hosts.txt">/export/hosts.txt</a></li>
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@
 
         <p>
         <b>Rules:</b><br>
-        Here no particular rules about registering domains, but we have some limitations about handling dead domain records.<br>
-        Your domain will be open for registration if it has been dead for:
+        Although there are no specific rules for domain registration, we do have the policy on dead domain records.<br>
+        Your domain will become open for registration again if it is dead for:
         <ul>
             <li>{{ delnewdays }} days if registered less than {{ newdays }} days ago</li>
             <li>{{ delolddays }} days if registered more than {{ newdays }} days ago</li>
@@ -48,14 +48,14 @@
         {% if approval %}
         <p>
         <b>Approval:</b><br>
-        Domain will be approved after {{ apprdelay }} hours, but only if it has been alive not more than {{ apprseen }} hours ago when approval time is reached.
+        Your domain will generally be approved within {{ apprdelay }} hour(s). However, your domain must be alive within the last {{ apprseen }} hour(s) before the approval is due.
         </p>
         {% endif %}
 
         {% if fetcher and subscrs|length > 0 %}
         <p>
         <b>External subscriptions:</b><br>
-        Our service fetching updates from external subscriptions once a day. List of external services:
+        Our service fetches external subscription updates daily. List of external services:
         <ul>
         {% for subscr in subscrs %}
             <li>{{ subscr.name }}</li>